A Day In The Life Of

I finished my "A Day In The Life Of..." slideshow and the only thing i believe could have been changed are the volumes of the narration and music.
For some reason the music overpowered the narration at all points, and even though i put the volume of the narration to full and the volume of the music as low as it would go, the music still overpowers my voice.

I would also write my own music for the piece instead of using GarageBand, as it limited my creative ideas, and the limitations within the loops on the software and their style.

Here's the video, feel free to comment it: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zauwd3UZa5U